Query Tips & Useful links – Part One: Fish, Fishing, Etc., My Top Querying Tips
Dec 26, 2024
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Querying is hard. I think this is a universal truth we can all agree on. You’re supposed to email complete strangers (email! Strangers! Of your own free will!) and ask them to please love your book enough to work on it for free—at least until there’s a deal. And to make it even harder, no one actually tells you how to do it. There’s no official handy guide to follow.
The only way I survived my querying process was through the incredibly kind help of strangers on the internet: agents who wrote guides, ran query critique blogs, and posted advice on YouTube; and writers who shared their own querying journeys, along with all the tips and tricks they’d picked up. These people were the reason I went from staring helplessly at my screen, thinking, what the hell is a query? to having my debut officially headed into copy edits today.
So I guess now, it’s my turn to be the stranger on the internet, and try to help the next writer staring at their screen, mumbling, querywhatnow?
I could upload my query stats — how many rejections, fulls, and offers it took to get my (amazing) agent — but I don’t think that’s actually helpful. The only thing it’ll tell you is how my timeline went down. And if there’s one thing I learned talking to other writers, it is that none of our querying journeys looked anything alike. I have friends with absolutely brilliant novels who spent longer querying than I did, and it wasn’t because my book was better than theirs.
So, instead, I’ll share my top six (dubious) pieces of advice. The things that I feel really made a difference, and helped make the querying process just a little bit easier and shorter, in the hopes that it might help you, too.
1: Expect a Learning Curve
There’s no way around it. Even if you queried a few years ago, chances are things have reshuffled: agents moved or quit, agencies shut down, changed names, or merged, and Twitter… well, yeah. No matter what, it takes time to figure out how a query should look and even more time to map out agents and agencies.
Let me say it again: it’s not you. It’s the fact that there’s no official certification system for agents. It’s the fact that it takes time and experience to develop a sense of who’s legit and who’s the right fit for you. And that’s before we even get to writing the query itself. (But don’t worry. We will.)
Funny story: I almost didn’t query my agent. I wrote her name down early, but when I first checked the CAA website, to my newbie eyes it looked very suspicious. (Yes, you can laugh now.) It wasn’t until I was a few months and several batches into querying that I’d learned enough to understand what I should be looking for and what it all meant.
I wish I could tell you exactly how I figured it out or give you a definitive checklist, but the truth is, querying is a bit like starting a new job: it takes time to figure out the layout, the workflows, and who keeps setting the AC to subzero, and there’s no way around it. And that’s okay.
But since we are in the tip-handing business:
Google your favorite authors. Start with authors you love. Then authors you like. Then authors in your genre who’ve made a splash recently. Most authors list their agents on their websites. Repeat this process enough times, and you’ll start to get a sense of the agencies and agents who are active in your genre.
This is actually how I first heard of my agent—by researching authors I admired and checking who represented them. In my case, it was Kate Elizabeth Russell, author of My Dark Vanessa. (If you haven’t read it, it’s absolutely gorgeous and you should. You’re welcome.)
Publishers Marketplace. The downside: it costs money. And while $25 per month is not (usually) the end of the world, it adds up fast. And most writers (myself included) aren’t exactly known for having tons of money to burn.
But. But this is truly the best tool I know for vetting agents. You can see how many deals they’ve made, when, in which genres, and with which publishers. It gives you a clear snapshot of who represents who and includes handy stats.
My advice? Do your preliminary research first and build a solid agent list. Then subscribe to Publishers Marketplace for one month and use that time to look up every agent on your list. While you’re at it, sign up for the daily deals roundup—it’s not only a great way to learn which agents are making deals right now, but also a great way to learn how to craft a one sentence hook.
Remember the time lag. Trade announcements like Publishers Marketplace are a bit like looking at the stars: they show you what publishing looked like months—or even years—ago. There’s often a long delay between signing a deal and announcing it. For me, it was a few months, but I know people who waited over a year. Just a thing to keep in mind.
2: Spreadsheets Are Your Friend
3: Critique Partners and Beta Readers Are the Best Thing. Seriously.
4: Query in Batches, or: Sometimes, Cookies Are Evil
5: Form Rejection is Feedback. Personalized Rejection is Gold.
6: The Nudging Manifesto
And… that’s it. For now. Very soon (fingers crossed) I'll post Part 2 - Useful Links and Resources, and hopefully also a post about the revisions my query went through.
If you’ve made it all the way here and have a great querying advice to share, or just want to say hi—I’d love to hear from you! The easiest way is to send me a message on Instagram at @barfridmantell, or you can use the Contact Me form here on the site. I’d absolutely love to hear your thoughts and share your advice (with a link to your website or profile, of course).
And in the meantime - good luck in the query trenches!